Thursday 16 August 2012

Writing Poems

In Room 10 we have been looking at poems and identifying the nouns, adjectives and verbs.  From the poem Bus Stop we changed two verbs and three adjectives.  Then we published these on the computer.  Here are two of our poems.

A  ginormous      crocodile sneaks   down the street   hunting for       something chocolaty to  eat. 
Jaxon


Ginormous  mad  crocodile   driving  down the  street,   hunting  for something   delicious  to  eat.
Hunter


7 comments:

  1. Hunter and Jaxon what great poems you have written.
    Mrs Robertson

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  2. I didn't know crocodiles love chocolate too!

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  3. I am very impressed that you know your verbs, nouns and adjectives!
    Ms Whitwell

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  4. Well done your rhyming was really clear.
    Grace W

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  5. I like the rhyming, now I want to hunt for chocolate .
    By Grace U

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  7. Excellent work guys you have worked really hard. Awesome story and picture.

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