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Thursday, 16 August 2012
Writing Poems
In Room 10 we have been looking at poems and identifying the nouns, adjectives and verbs. From the poem Bus Stop we changed two verbs and three adjectives. Then we published these on the computer. Here are two of our poems.
Aginormouscrocodile sneaksdown the streethunting forsomething chocolaty toeat.
Jaxon
Ginormousmadcrocodiledrivingdown thestreet,hunting for somethingdelicioustoeat.
Hunter and Jaxon what great poems you have written.
ReplyDeleteMrs Robertson
I didn't know crocodiles love chocolate too!
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed that you know your verbs, nouns and adjectives!
ReplyDeleteMs Whitwell
Well done your rhyming was really clear.
ReplyDeleteGrace W
I like the rhyming, now I want to hunt for chocolate .
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ReplyDeleteExcellent work guys you have worked really hard. Awesome story and picture.
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